Lots of voice! There was a lot of info. All the gross info (i.e. the brains being used as animal feed.)
I loved how much voice you had. It was like you were talking to the reader face to face.
I liked it you used a lot of voice and you had a lot of info and used it really well. You made me think you really were there when they did the mumiffication
Lots of voice! There was a lot of info. All the gross info (i.e. the brains being used as animal feed.)
ReplyDeleteI loved how much voice you had. It was like you were talking to the reader face to face.
ReplyDeleteI liked it you used a lot of voice and you had a lot of info and used it really well. You made me think you really were there when they did the mumiffication
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